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Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Open


Struggling to breathe

Suffocating in a world of unhappiness

Strangled in a life that dissatifies

Sorry for a day that nothing is achieved

Shamed for frequent mistakes

Sure that nothing will go right

Showered in tears of agonising pain

Stuck on the road towards a dead-end

Shocked from twisted dark secrets

Sinking feelings and emotions

So hard.
©2008 *J-Day
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Just... blah.
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~LiveBleedDie:iconLiveBleedDie: May 17, 2008, 1:18:47 AM
hmm intersting, i like how you used S's in the start of each line, you should do that for the whole alphabet :D lol that might get annoying though ><

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No i didnt kill him, the bullets and the ground killed him.
Im only wearing black untill i can find something darker.
{¯`v´¯}
.`·.¸.·´
¸.·´¸.·´¨} ¸.·*¨}
{¸.·´ {¸.·´ .·´ ¸¸.·¨¯`·~
got a problem?
*J-Day:iconJ-Day: May 17, 2008, 1:21:57 AM
Thanks. :) Hah, yeah. It might a bit. :|

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Live free or die.

"The search for God is absurd?
"It is if everyone dies alone.
~LiveBleedDie:iconLiveBleedDie: May 17, 2008, 1:34:10 AM
^^ but it would be awesome :D

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No i didnt kill him, the bullets and the ground killed him.
Im only wearing black untill i can find something darker.
{¯`v´¯}
.`·.¸.·´
¸.·´¸.·´¨} ¸.·*¨}
{¸.·´ {¸.·´ .·´ ¸¸.·¨¯`·~
got a problem?
*J-Day:iconJ-Day: May 17, 2008, 1:36:14 AM
Perhaps.

--
Live free or die.

"The search for God is absurd?
"It is if everyone dies alone.
~LiveBleedDie:iconLiveBleedDie: May 17, 2008, 1:37:31 AM
:D
so what have u been up to lately?

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No i didnt kill him, the bullets and the ground killed him.
Im only wearing black untill i can find something darker.
{¯`v´¯}
.`·.¸.·´
¸.·´¸.·´¨} ¸.·*¨}
{¸.·´ {¸.·´ .·´ ¸¸.·¨¯`·~
got a problem?
*J-Day:iconJ-Day: May 17, 2008, 1:40:10 AM
Nothing much. Watching The L Word and currently in the midst of my exams. You?

--
Live free or die.

"The search for God is absurd?
"It is if everyone dies alone.
~LiveBleedDie:iconLiveBleedDie: May 17, 2008, 7:11:23 AM
ooo i just finished most of my exams, still got two more to go.
other then that not doing much.
im getting ready to go to a 17th of May celebration, wich is a holiday in Norway, even tho im not in Norway right now. >< lol

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No i didnt kill him, the bullets and the ground killed him.
Im only wearing black untill i can find something darker.
{¯`v´¯}
.`·.¸.·´
¸.·´¸.·´¨} ¸.·*¨}
{¸.·´ {¸.·´ .·´ ¸¸.·¨¯`·~
got a problem?
=JinDevilKazama:iconJinDevilKazama: May 17, 2008, 3:02:20 PM
Dude, that's a lot of S's.
Nice work though¬ :D

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The poet is a liar who always tells the truth

When the World ends, collect your things. You're coming with me..

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*J-Day:iconJ-Day: May 18, 2008, 2:35:42 AM
Heh, yeah.

Thanks. :)

--
Live free or die.

"The search for God is absurd?
"It is if everyone dies alone.
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