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All Deviations
All Deviations


Trapped in a world, in a life

Where nothing feels right

And everything feels wrong

Nothing I can do anymore

Tried it all, failed it all

Stood with my back against the wall

Broken hands

From past anger against brick

Can't really feel it

The pain of nothing, the pain of everything

The clattter of stones, the fall of rain

Blaring yellow light of sun, glowing white moon

Don't know what to do or what to think

Overwhelmed by it all yet so isolated and alone

Forever torn

in the limbo of neither life or death.
©2008 *J-Day
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in a weird headspace at the moment.
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=JinDevilKazama:iconJinDevilKazama: May 4, 2008, 5:42:42 PM
I kinda like this one. Nice job. :D

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*J-Day:iconJ-Day: May 4, 2008, 9:50:28 PM
Thanks. :D

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"The search for God is absurd?
"It is if everyone dies alone.
~wikki3:iconwikki3: May 4, 2008, 11:27:57 PM
"The clatter of stones, the fall of rain"
cool line :ohnoes:

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*J-Day:iconJ-Day: May 4, 2008, 11:40:05 PM
Thanks. :)

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Live free or die.

"The search for God is absurd?
"It is if everyone dies alone.
=JinDevilKazama:iconJinDevilKazama: May 5, 2008, 8:12:26 AM
No problems. ;)

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The poet is a liar who always tells the truth

When the World ends, collect your things. You're coming with me..

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~wikki3:iconwikki3: May 7, 2008, 10:11:40 PM
you're welcome :ohnoes:

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French bread is your neighbor.